Feedback of my double page spread

I have researched different ways in which i could improve my music magazine by asking different memebers of my target audience their opinions:

1.I think the addition of an image in the bottom right-hand corner of the magazine would instantly make the article more accesible.

2.Lay the text out in a different way to make it more in keeping with the theme, perhaps change the font to improve it further.

3.Merge the boarder into the blank background to make it look more professional.

Feedback for my final front cover

By conducting reaearch about my final front cover i was able to find out the worst and best bits of my magazine so i can edit my front cover and make it more sutiable for industry than it is at present:


1.A better quality image so it appears less grainy. By changing this it would make the image gain more of an effect and allow a more professional theme.

2.Inserting sub-images to entice the sudience into buying the magazine and reading it on a frequent basis.

3.More plugs would make the front cover more interesting for the target audience.

Feedback on my contents page

I collected a range of different opinions on my work in order to understand aspects of my magazine which need editing in order to improve my music magazine dramatically:

1.I think that by making your image smoother it would instantly improve the aesthetic appeal of the contents page.

2.The colour of the contents page is too plain and dull, which makes the magazine appear boring before you even start reading it.

3.Make the amount of contents options substantially bigger in order to make them look more related to the themed magazine you are trying to create.

Image Planning

Image Editing